Score: 8

"possible potential"

submission: Street Name Desire

date: April 21, 2005

for your first try not bad. i found it a bit difficult to hear the actual timing of the beats. but none the less nice try. why not try out different things in your tunes like beat breaks and alternate bass. i will be generous though because i understand where the song may come from. get some ideas from other hip hop songs and you could be on to something. if you want some samples of good compositions, email me at jozzmundo@gmail.com